hehe, i liked that :-)

AHH! ::snioff:: I lvoe happy endings...well, it was sprta happy! good job Jenni!

Okay, will do. Story is good.

you added that part in there with the whole ellimsit thing, no, thatwas not all there before, I would have remembered it...hehe, I love this story, wouldn't Kyle have known Loren wasn't a controller neways though, thats like supposed ot be his talent or somethign right? I still loved it! great job Jenni. And if you don't get the next chapter up soon, I will personally kiil you.

Still too lazy. Didn't know about this part until I recieved the notice in E-mail. I think this' really good so far (?) Is there going to be another part to this? I guess I'll find out, though, won't I?

Hey Jenni

Great story! I loved this one. You have a fasination with Kyle and Mina, don't you? No matter, you're a wonderful writer no matter you write.

Again, great story, i loved it. We gotta keep those simming fans clued in on all those little past stories.

Loved this one.

Your pal and simming buddy,

-Ali

Yeah, I'm too tired to log in too. Anyway, I think it was sweet. Very "aaawwww".

I am to tired to log in...hehe, very good, I love that, Kyle is so cute, with dark hair and blue eyes and...I wanted Kyle, why did I let Mina have him?