Wow. This is different from your previous works. I love the metaphors you tied with the water and the woman's feelings. This is rather like poetry rather than a ficlett, what with the descriptions and meanings behind the words. Keep it up GuTTerArT; you're a talented writer. Don't say you're not ;). Plus, a critical analysis for a review isn't something you'd get bad karma for, since you're actually helping the writer improve on their talents.

Anyway, this is the Carrot commanding you write more fics like this. I love indulging myself in it.

Amazing!

Just fantastic!

Scout Girl

Wow!

I LOVE NOVICE HAME

SO I love this fic!

:D

Scout Girl

Cool concept. I like authors who have original thoughts. I'm tired of all the Ten/Rose crap out there, show me something different and fresh like this excellent story.