 Angelyn 2008-05-23 . chapter 9Great Story!! I'd read this some time ago and never reviewed till now. Sorry about that! =( Update soon!! Cuz I wanna see Relena and Dorothy get what's coming to them. LOL. |
 Nebelkind 2008-03-23 . chapter 9You sound really busy...
I am looking forward to the next chap! Don´t worry about time spent waiting I as long as you plan on updating it doesn´t matter!^^ |
 cherry fantasy 2008-03-15 . chapter 9Ah, who doesn't like a little scandal every now and then ? ^_~ So Duo was a stripper ? Wow... [drools] I wonder how the other guys will take it... Heero's reaction was my favorite though : the little green monster called jealousy has pointed its ugly head ! ^^;; Can't wait to read more about that ! ^_^
Anyway, great chap ! ^.^ Hope to read more soon ! |
 Dragon77 2008-03-13 . chapter 9Grate chapter! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON. |
 Vitanie Tora 2008-03-12 . chapter 9Well that's a rather insteresting twist. Love to see how this plays out, so until later
Tora-chan |
 Knyghtshade 2008-03-12 . chapter 9Halo tournement! YAY Halo rocks. achem... yah... GO Duo kick her butt. hehe anyway. It was short! But, better than nothing. |
 Nebelkind 2008-01-04 . chapter 4Hey, there!
Your story is really good so far! I just love Duo!
I just wanted to tell you there are some little mistakes in your German translation. Mostly some big and small writing and ä, ü and ö mistakes, but I´ll just write you how it´s right written, cause I really like it when Duo speaks German!! (I´m German so I hope I don´t make any translation mistakes, because of the different meaning in English or something like that)
Well, here is it:
Your mom is a ** and is very comfortable in bed with her hands.” =Deine Mutter ist eine Schlampe und ist mit ihren Händen sehr gemütlich im Bett. (That was more or less a direct translation)
In my free time, I love to eat small children= In meiner Freizeit libe ich es kleine Kinder zu essen.
Your mom in bed with a paddle (I don´t really know what a paddle is because my lexikon says it means Paddel/Rührschaufel or Schaufel and that doesn´t really makes sense to me. But it has to be Deine Mutter
Well... It’s no pants time! Hooray! is more or less right... eventhought it sounds really strange and you would normally say it different, but I don´t know how to put it right right now.
Then there are möchten Drogenhändler and Preis
I hope I´m not to critical or someting..
I´ll read the rest of your story!
Bye! |
 angel of symphonia 2007-09-26 . chapter 8Oh my God! I love Heero Is Not Toast! I've had it saved into my favourites since, like... Forever! /.- |
 Vitanie Tora 2007-09-05 . chapter 8Nice chapter, can't wait to see what Dorothy came up with. Sounds like this are going to get very interesting for the Gboys, so until later
Tora-chan |
 Shinigamiclarissa02 2007-09-04 . chapter 8 yay another chapter. I like this story and hope to see more of it... and its even better cause I dont really like Relena that much |
 Kirihana 2007-09-03 . chapter 8I'll have to check that website out... it sounds interesting. Heh, cucumbers. Keep up the good work! |
 hink 2007-09-02 . chapter 8 i don't understand why they would agree to host them?
still, interesting fic. do continue. |
 melody 2007-09-01 . chapter 8 really cool
update soon! |
 Blindy 2007-09-01 . chapter 8Hey...nice story. Interesting storyline, good character development. Great stuff. If you still need a beta-reader, I'm available. My qualifications, you ask? Straight As in all college English classes, teacher for ESL students in a small international school...and I'm a perfectionist with a passion for the language. Let me know if you need me.
B. |
 cherry fantasy 2007-08-31 . chapter 8"But... what about... CUCUMBERS ?" ^^ God, that part made me laugh so hard it hurt... ::wipes tears from her eyes:: Hilarious, simply hilarious ! ^-^
I loved this chap ! ^_^ Gosh ; Heero, Duo, Dorothy and Relena living in the same house... I can already see the proverbial sparks flying... ^^;; It ought to be funny though ! ^_~ And what did Dorothy find ? My curiosity is picked...
Anyway, this was great ! ^^ And don't fret, I won't picket your house or anything. ^_~ Hope you update soon ! |