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Reviews For: Like Tears in the Rain

Anonymous
2007-06-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseSweet story. I like the explanation of tears in the rain leading to a new life. One should not be afraid to cry because it can help release emotion and start the healing process. At the same time it doesn't mean we forget the ones we love, maybe we can begin to remember them with love and laughter, not just tears.
Merrybeans
2007-04-27
ch 1,
abuseAw, this was sweet. Quite poignant, too.

I like how Sydney knows he's there and about to go, without having to look. It's nice too that she shares this with him.

" “I'm English. I'm used to rain ten times colder than this.” " This line is the best! :D Made me laugh!

The only thing I would say is that the ending seems a tad abrupt, but apart from that I really enjoyed this. :)
loopylulu
2007-04-25
ch 1,
abuseWhat a cute story. How touching. I look forward to more! Lulu.
kiwi6226
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abusecute! I liked it :)
Roxy
ivoryrose
2007-04-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was beautiful and very touching. It was very well written and was good to see Sydney as a real vulnerable women. I liked the way how Nigel studied her and how she let closer him to her. It was a very nice part when Syd asked if Nigel cries and his reaction!
Wonderful fic!
I'm looking forward your next one!
katia1
2007-04-20
ch 1,
abuseThis is just so beautiful! I love Sydney's little monologue about kissing the rain, and the subtle allusion to the song lyrics. Despite my perennial demands for 'more! more! more!' I think this is simply perfect as it is - it captures such a delicate moment. That said, in terms of your writing overall, I can't wait for more...k x
Aryea
2007-04-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was simply lovely. What a beautiful, yet simple way to show how Sydney and Nigel connect. Very well done indeed
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