lol he was tired after that?

cloud 9 xD

so far so good

Nice job so far on this...keep up the good work!

Really good, sure beets the Iliad, very entertaining.

Great Chapter

you're right, it's been too long since your last update. Can't wait for the next one though ! :D

Wonderful! I'm intrigued . . . it seems as though Artemis already knows Cam, so does that mean Cam is actually some mystical being reincarnated as a mere mortal? Probably not, but there's my imagination on the run. I find it strange that more people aren't reviewing -- you write a very entertaining story. Please update soon!

P.S. The jolt when they touched was interesting. It reminded me of Edward and Bella in the book Twilight.

O.O You must update! I'm hooked.

This seems like a fun story so far. :-) I do wish the chapters were longer, though. Please update soon!

i absolutely loved it. can't wait to read more so please put up another chapter soon:P

wow i haven't read much mythology lately but i like this one it has a lot of potential.

I love Apollo! I love him I love him I love him! I also love this story!

i love it ! pls update soon ! ^^

great job! are you goind to write more? i want more. i cant think of anything that would make it better