That was awesome! Go L!

I'm definitely not a fan of LxMisa, but this was an adorable oneshot. ;)

Ahaha, wow so random. I never really saw any light in this pairing at all. I didn't think it could work at all. But somehow, you pulled it off... O.o
Congrats! (I think).
Keep writing!!

Hah. That last line totally got me. L blushing? Muahahhah!

wow! really really nicely done fic! I love Lxmisa! so cute! more! haha!

Oh, it was so cute...
I loved itt..L and Misa make a interisting couple =P
So well, keep the good Work!;D

The first sentence hook me instantly!
Your characterization of Misa, a bit spoiled on the edges, was simply perfect.
Great job with the story

Oh wow. This is really adorable. You portrayed L really well here, and this was enjoyable to read. Nice job! ^^

Aww, how cute. Great job!! I especially loved the last line!

You did a really wonderful job with this… I love the way you wrote Misa's voice, it sounded just like her. :) Thank you, I had a lot of fun reading this story. :)

nice one...

i have trouble deciding which side i like more: the idea of L being completely virginal, and having him be unexpectedly experienced. i like how misa is shocked by his skill, but a little bit dubious on whether he's telling the truth. xD it makes me wonder about just who he's been practicing with, who his past involvements are, whatever. but enough about this, i love this fic! you've done such a great job and i hope to see more from you~

aw! he blushed at the end! good job on this one, even if you were suffering from jet-lag.

Oh, I absolutely loved that. You had me smiling and snickering and it was just magic, magic, magic, you did a really wonderful Misa and a really (oddly) sexy L and the narration was funny and flowing and perfect. To a tee. Really. It just happened very very nicely and believably, and the dialogue was great too. Your wording was great!

Also, I got this feeling that you enjoyed writing it. I mean, I'm not sure if you did, but to me it read that way, and really made it all the more fun. The only little concrit I can give is that I'm not really sure if Misa would think of a complicated word like 'aneurysm' off the top of her head in a moment like that, but that's just my guess of her character. And it detracted nothing from this lovely, lovely story. I am in awe. ^^ Excellent job and I hope you keep on writing.

Excellent! One of the best LMisa fics I've read so far. Well done!

Keep Writing!

~May