great story i especially luved the end lol =]

aww, so cute. :)
hope you make more soon. if you like, maybe you could write a fic for TSL about Trevor and Maddie.
i just WISH that this really would happen in real life.
anyway, your story was really great.
hope you write more troypay/zashley fics. i'll put ya on alert!

this is an amazing story! Its great!

No offence right...
Although your writing is readable,
don't you think its a little sad writing stories
by using real life people?
I mean no disrespect right, but you could
actually get busted for writing this stuff...
what if by chance someone unexpected read it...
and got offended?
You wouldn't like it if someone started writing
a story about you...I mean I wouldn't like it...
I'm jut aying that although this seems like
a perfectedly well written and structed story...
and seems harmless to many...
It could affect people...

Geez..STOP WITH THE CAST STORIES PEOPLE!

Its sad and shows that people have no lives,
other than to be sitting down and
writing something like this...

But anyway your writings okay...I guess...

Peace out.

Awesome ending but you did forget to put the 'complete' sign in your story!

I really like the ending. It was SO CUTE...
Totally..
o m g I'll tell my dad what you told me.
But I might not be able to come!! =(
Maybe Maybe not...we have to see.

I l y s m Foxy
-Hui Xian xoxox

It's over?! Aw. :[
But this chapter was cute.
TrevorAndMaddie. :]
I missed all of this cute Troypay stuffs!
Imma go catch up on what I missed right now!
ILY Yeshii!

AHH!!
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG.

it DID NOT end, hun.
NO. it didn't.

nonononononononononononono!!
please. no.

holyshiznet.

dude. omgosh.
URGHH.

hahahahah, i wanted M FLUFF.
hottness.

ilysm babee xx

AH!
I've been missing lots of updates. So I have to go review.
ANYWAYS, ugh. My myspace is still evil? Urgh. I'll try to fix it later. =P. Tehe. Zash is so ah-dorable.

Chapter wise:
NOW IF ONLY THEY DID BRING TREVOR BACK.
All time other fave eppy.
Anyways, aw.
I loved loved loved it. =)

wow yoda it's like OVER what a sweet unexcpeting end. wow . really like a movie!

This was beautiful, aww and that kiss they share hott tehe can u call up zac n ash n send them this story so that could actually happen ..oh n they have to video tap it yay!

So what is like zanessa still going r what ( die die die) sorry my bad but seriously a whole article on them SHOPPING get a life people plz , but know what he still cant get her of his mind did u read the rolling stone isue how jus randomly out of nowhere he sarted to talk about Ash n how his seen her grow up into a very very very ( the eaxct # of verys HE used) beautiful girl can u say hm ( oh n he was aksed bout VANESSA when he said that hm) n theres other stuff too but we all know hes droolin over her lol

hey did u c Ashley's music video it was hott n spicy lol!

c u letrz Marri (:))

Well, I wanted to ask about 'tonight'.
But you told us not to so...
Let's just say, you should have put it in!
And I love it!
You should do a sequel or something or like make someone else write tonight for you!
That will be great!

~Emily

Lovely ending. Love it so much. Zashley rocks

Wow...you rerally worked ** this one didn't you Trarty? I can totally tell. You did great...but I think I'll take a rain-check on 'tonight' @_@

But this chapter was great! You know..I was on youtube the other day and I saw like, two picture of Zac and Ashley kissing in Hawaii. I was all O_O you should see how 'in to it' they were in of the pictures. It reminded me more of Troypay then Zashley. *shrugs* I don't know why...

But...great chapter as per usual. I'm stalling, I seriously don't feel Frenchy or Geographyish today.

I'm off!
Ash

*disappears*

Wow, what a great ending. It was well done, sweets! I loved it, mucho! Haha, I'll maybe update another part of mean girls.. I dunno! You need to update your other stories as well! Love yah.

omg ! HUNI ITS OVER NO! and what about the zanessa's hehe i wanna know lol and yep am always on ur eeview oage hehe goo AMES ! lol ;) aww am going to miss this story but LOVED IT ALL HUNI LOVE YHO SO MUCH TO HEHE KEEP THEM COMING HUN XD

Ames
xxo

u need to update asap!