Wow, that was great! Really funny, love the irony too. :)

Would you consider writing a sequal to this? it sort of has what what it takes.



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Hello David!

you have my complete admiration for this master piece of work!
please, keep it up, ^^

cool, another betty/vivian^^

Ausome! I loved it! Hope to see more like it.

great story. i enjoyed reading it. i think that betty and vivian are quickly becoming one of my favorite pairings

Yeah great story. No need for lemon in this story. It was really great. But it wasn't so very clear when you changed to the last scene. Oh and by the way: What is a skillet?

i enjoyed reading it, great one.

I would just like to say to things. I love the fan fiction, and that stuff they use to model your eye socket feels weird.

well, that's not a pairing I've thought of. Good story, though...I'd love to know how Shego and Betty's conversation went after that...

omg. i totally loved this story! i heart betty and vivian

First off...and thank you to SL for giving you this plot bunny. :)
Great story...and great pairing.
I think the pairing of Betty and Vivian has great potential.
I also liked Shego working undercover for GJ. :)
Coolio's all around.

BetVian, ViBet, ViTy, ... I give up! Whatever "ship" it is, sign me up. I'm am a big Kigo fan, but I REALLY like seeing stories that bring out Dr. Director (or Mrs Dr. Possible) and allow her character to develop. I feel like the best stories are those that reveal more of a charater's personality. I feel like I know the PERSON a little better after reading the story. Also, I look forward to reading AGAIN! (Once is never enough for a True Beliver!)

Yes! More Betty action, give me more! I was ready to brain you for this idea with a baseball bat and then run off with it, but I'm glad you kept it. I got my own idea and plus, you produced this fine little piece of work. Bet/Viv is a great pairing and there should be more. I like Shego's ending line "What can the Ice Queen be so happy about now? Where you out clubbing baby seals?” It had me laughing for a while. Good work. Let's continue on with our campaign for some Betty-loving! Hasta...

Many typos abound; you need to proof better, though it wasn’t *nearly* as bad as it could have been. As for the story itself, it was pretty good. Felt a little rushed, but then again it was obvious you were going for the old “sledgehammer between they eyes” kinda attraction that sends folks into bed with each other before they even know what’s going on, so it fits.