Absolutely captivating and fantastic. I love your description. Just absolutely beautiful, beautiful imagery...you are an amazing writer. Excellent job.

wow that was great! really well written!

That was really good ... short and sweet. I liked that you wrote an optimistic ending but left it open-ended, avoiding the typical 'happily ever after.' Also, as a fellow journalism student, I have to say, yay for good grammar! :-D

aww! how sweet!

Very cute. I liked it. =) What might be better...not sure, but maybe some more exposition. Just a suggestion. ^^ Very fluffy.

Interesting