A great story. Very good.

Just found this story. Very nicely done! Original characters are always difficult to pull off, especially two. You did a good job of balancing them so neither ended up being plain Mary Sues. I hope you write more and show how your characters change and grow along with events. Hopefully more people will come looking for B5 fanfic after the new DVD comes out and will find this story. :)

A well written story, that is worth reading mulitple times. You have written a story with lots of interesting charachters, and I hope that you will find a way to continue this tale through Season 4 and into the final Season of Babylon 5.