good story!

i loved it

wow.

I really like this one shot. It was...in a way canon, and in a way, not. But it kept them in character, and I really liked it.

The only suggestion I can make is that you make the story more clear, by using more commas, semicolons, and italicizations. It was hard to tell what was happening, and what had happened.

And by the way, is this Naruto, or Shippuuden?

its really cute, its hard to find a good fanfic these days. i loved it

i know how u feel i read them from 10-4 addictive huh? It was good you should continue writing naruxsaku

This is a cute story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.

That was really kawaii _