Wow! I loved this. It gave me goosebumps and made my heart flip. Great writing. (And I can't believe you wrote that all that time ago and we're still waiting for something as good as this!!). x

Sweet :)

I liked the beginning, with the description of the hugs.
I liked the interaction between them in both chapters.
And I loved the ending, and especially everything Booth said when he came to her house.

Ohh, sweet!
'Guy hugs are not what you give women you are interested in.' True, unless you don't want the girl to knwow you're interested! :)
Also, I loved how you had Brennan answer questions with questions. Like when Booth said, 'Do you ever want more' and she said, 'Do you?' instead of giving a straight answer.
Typical avoidance tactic that I can imagine her implamenting in tha type of situation. Excellent characterisation...
Hope you keep writing!

What a great fic! I totally loved it, it was awesome.

I loved all the first chapter. When Brennan goes to Booth´s place and asks him for a hug... it was SO well written! I mean, I couldn´t think of anything like this happening in the show, however you keep them perfectly in character all the time. Amazing.

"And others don’t?", "Not like you." Gorgeous ^_^

Also, the descriptions of their huges at the beginning were beautiful! A pleasure reading and a great way of making us see why your story makes perfectly sense. I´m sorry my English sucks! I don´t know how to say what I mean.

In the second chapter, I love the whole conversation between Brennan and Angela. But my favourite moment is when Brennan thinks Booth doesn´t want to be her friend anymore. "Don’t come here and tell me you don’t want me in your life." It was funny, and sweet, to read the little misunderstanding. I loved it :-)

Well, once more, forgive my English. And thank you very much for sharing! :-)

So sweet, I really liked it.

You did a wonderful job with this story. You managed to let me feel what the characters were feeling, it was not like other fluffy stories that are great but boring because, when you think about it, they're always the same. Even if it was easy to know what was going to happen eventually, the story doesn't loose its interest. I read it yesterday before going to bed and it helped bringing me sweet dreams ;)

OMG..so freakin sweet...and fluffy...and that first kiss...to die for.



A big fat yes. For me anyway :D

Perfect.

--fab from Boneyard

so very cute i loved it

Amazing, Amazing, Amazing!
Oh you truly are a master! This was incredibly believable and it was as if I was watching an episode! I love your work, and this is going on my favourites list the second I finish this sentence! ;)
You rule!

great fic. love the fluff. like that you've got bones making the first move and booth being stumped. so glad they got there in the end.


great work look forward to more

Hey, I was digging round my files and I found the chapter you sent to me. So I came here looking for your story and here it is.

I'm glad you used the line of "Maybe we aren't meant to be friends." You done so much more with the story that I could ever have imagined, so kudos to you!

You got everything that is them so totally right.

You did it well and for that, I'm saving it to my favs.

JEM!
GAWD! Aren't HUGS AWESOME! I mean kisses are good TOO, BUT I JUST LOVE HUGS!~~HUGS make my DAY!! I LOV'D that she HUGGED him before they kissed~~that embrace was so important I think!!THIS was so SAPPY, FLUFFY, SWEET! I LOV'D IT!! TERRIFIC JOB hon!

~G :D

Aw, that was one of the most believable and adorable stories I have ever read! I loved how you put so much fluff into it, while remaining true to their characters. In so many fics I read, they have the 'turning point convo' followed by the I love yous and then crazy love on the nearest bed.

I officially love your fanfics, after only reading two.

And the only comment I have to make that could be construed as negative would be that making the story past tense would help a lot. The story should only be present tense when in first person, and even then, so I'm told, past tense is better.

Oh, yay! What a good fic! I loved it!

A great hug can fix a lot of things. Another wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it.