Really good read, lovin' every chapter... Can't wait for more!

I'm with Nvrmore, this is awesome! Nicely done, a pleasure to read with a totally rockin' Carth and Revan! Good luck with the next chapter (if there is one)

Your Revan rocks! I love the description of how she walks across the central chamber to confront Uthar and Carth's thoughts about her. I also liked Carth getting jealous over Revan in chapter 1 :p I really like how the events in your story weave together, they are masterfully written. This story is so gripping. Good luck with the next chapter.

Oh my gosh, this chapter is wonderful. You have pegged Carth's feelings superbly and Jolee is great as counselor. Thank you for writing.

Awesome!

Nicely done. And while lengthy, not at all boring. I really like how you show what's going on by posture and looks and not necessarily by telling us what the others are thinking.

And... I love KotOR, so a little walk-through is fun to read, especially one done as well as you have done it.

Kudos and I look forward to the next installment.

Nice... You should have mission have a talk about her big sister too.

I really like how you got into Carth's head. I also enjoyed the conversation with Jolee. I'll be anxiously awaiting part two.

I loved Resurrecting A Fallen Appellation, and I like this too. I hope you're writing more of this!