 Jottma 2007-04-20 . chapter 1 I enjoyed your story, and to me it flowwed really nicely. I am questioning however, if Nathan would indulge his father's wish for the day so quickly? I am by no means an expert on their relationship, but in the stories I was able to read on the character, I don't recall him being so unguarded around Scott. Anyways thank you for writing a well written story about Cyke in a favorable light, it was fun for me. Best of luck in your future writing endeavors. |