-nods- Yeah... it does sound pretty Arisa-ish... very beautiful! I like it! You should write poems more often.

Akki

I like it! Makes me want to write a Furuba-ish poem for school, too!

wow, that's beautiful, you're so talented! ) i like how you repeat some lines, but not too often and then the heroic couplet at the end- brilliant!

and it actually does remind me of kyoko.