I've just reread this, partly because I'd forgotten some of what happened, and I realized that I never did comment on the incredible imagery you've got in here...

No matter how hard it poured, the rain had no chance to erase the red stains from tears on his cheeks.

That gave me goosebumps.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Uhoh... somebody got caught! ;-) Update soon!

Very nice... I like how you introduced completely new characters but still manage to make us feel for them after only a couple chapters.

Are Gwen and Raneigh real characters in 24? First Milo story ever, I wish more people would post things about Milo and Nadia. Do you take requests, I'd love to read a fic about Milo and Nadia, if you like them as a couple.

Keep writing, great job! :)

interesting. I like it, the first milo story aroud. please continue!

Simply beautiful. Great job! Keep it up! :D