A little late in jumping on board with the praise, but I think this is a great Jack/Kate story. They've always been a favorite pairing of mine on the show, and it's always nice to read a story starring the two of them.

This is a FANTASTIC story. It made me fall in love with the Jack/Kate pairing all over again.
If you could please update, it would be greatly appreciated. =]

good descriptions and I like the end part. keep going!

Wow! Marie? I never would've thought to introduce her. She was kinda forgotten after Season 2...then again, all of the Warners were. Good job, though!

interesting plot i like the dialogue too

I like it so far...you don't usually see lots of Jate fics these days.

Wow, this is really good! I don't watch 24 at all, but you wrote it in a way that I'd know what's going on... good job. I love how you hint at back-stories, without giving away too much information, it really makes me want to read more. Please write more! :)

i miss jack kate. thanks for writing. pls add soon

I love Jack and Kate and I love the way you show them so keep it up, it's a really nice story!

God, I love this story! You're so far ahead of me!

Bah, I liked it. A lot. :]

It was GReat :]

I liked it. Very nice. :]

So, I've never seen this show before but you're an amazing writer. :]

I smell a romance.