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| Andrea Keyes 2007-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a FANTASTIC story. It made me fall in love with the Jack/Kate pairing all over again. If you could please update, it would be greatly appreciated. =] |
| yeaboutthat 2007-05-24 ch 4, anon. | abusegood descriptions and I like the end part. keep going! |
| pippy777 2007-05-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow! Marie? I never would've thought to introduce her. She was kinda forgotten after Season 2...then again, all of the Warners were. Good job, though! |
| hmm 2007-05-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseinteresting plot i like the dialogue too |
| justsomeperson 2007-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it so far...you don't usually see lots of Jate fics these days. |
| Rarecase 2007-05-20 ch 4, | abuseWow, this is really good! I don't watch 24 at all, but you wrote it in a way that I'd know what's going on... good job. I love how you hint at back-stories, without giving away too much information, it really makes me want to read more. Please write more! :) |
| chipsnopotatoes 2007-05-15 ch 4, anon. | abusei miss jack kate. thanks for writing. pls add soon |
| mania 2007-05-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love Jack and Kate and I love the way you show them so keep it up, it's a really nice story! |
| CarthsLostPadawan 2007-05-07 ch 4, | abuseGod, I love this story! You're so far ahead of me! |
| Espyyy 2007-05-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseBah, I liked it. A lot. :] |
| Espy 2007-05-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseIt was GReat :] |
| Espyyyy 2007-05-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseI liked it. Very nice. :] |
| Espyyyy 2007-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo, I've never seen this show before but you're an amazing writer. :] |
| Kayla 2007-05-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseI smell a romance. |
| Kayla 2007-05-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseWhat a twist! =O! Can't wait for more. |