VERY nicely done! One of the best-written fics I've read in awhile.

lol. i had to laugh at this..joeys all casually going about bakura...lol too funny. :3

You got Jou's character down to an art! I really enjoyed this story!

Ha ha, this is great! XD Very creative. I can so easily hear this conversation in my head, and I love Yami Y interrupting. Best line: "I've concluded you surround yourself with imbeciles." Priceless.