aww, this is so sad...poor poor Malik. :-( although i do love marik as well...he's a psychopathic 6 year old, what's not to love, lol! great oneshot either way, i wonder what's going to happen to Isis...stuck alone with Marik.

This story was amazing!
It gave me chills. :D

Holy frick, I am FREAKED out. In a good way, somehow. DAMN, that was fantastic and suspenseful and thrilling and perfectly in character. Your execution of Yami no Malik's creepy pervasiveness is flawless, as is Malik's horror and fear. Bravo!

Wow! That was very good and very well written!

Wow! This fic was amazing, I especially like the way you captured the characters...i feel you got them both perfectly. Very dark but in a good way, all i can really say is awesome!

Hmm... Reminds me of mine. Only better...
If I pass this round, I really need to try working on the next one if I want to have any chance at beating you or a few others.

Oh you're absolutely right. It was disturbing. Oo But same time very awesome and DARK. You know that I got inspired because of this? =) And writed a poem-in finnish. Anyways, this is one GREAT bronzeshipping fanfiction. Even though(or tough, I can't never remember what's the difference. ._.) this could be masturbaton..since they're both same person..but hell, this is only fiction. ^^ Also, it's great that both have left in their character, and no any weird OOC'ness. And I do believe that Yami no Malik is not defeated. He will be with Malik rest of his life, wether he liked it, or not.. You should be honored for the gift of writing, I can only make poems! =D I think I fave this story and you. ^^ Have a nice day.

For the love of God, please learn how business and finance work before you try this. Or just live the life of a normal human being.

Oh, I'm just a sucker when it comes to good and dark bronzeshipping fics. I personally think there aren't enough Yami Malik/Malik fics out there to do the pairing justice. is positively SPILLING with Yami/Yugi and Bakura/Ryou fics, but the darkest hikari/yami pairing is very hard to come by (good ones, that is).

Well, I haven't read bronzeshipping for a while now (even though it's my personal fave), so this was just a terrific and very enjoyable read for me.

Dark themes always seem to suit bronzeshipping the most, and you did it awesomely. Malik and Marik were both in-character. And I just love how you made Marik so twisted and dark and...yeah...XD

Heh, sorry for the rather long-winded review. Simply put, this is of themost well-written bronzeshipping-fic I've come across for quite a while.

That was very good. It was also very disturbing. Poor Malik. His Yami has taken over his life.

Hmm.. Maybe I should find it disturbing that I actually think this fic as amusing.. Shrug, anyway, I like it. Love it more likely.

dude, that was extremely...dark. but soo amazing! i loved it!