Wow. So, I found this one-shot not too long ago, read it, and came back later to devour it again. I love the way you give each Triforce bearer a distinct personality befitting thier gifts, and how each of them respond.

Personall, I wouldn't be adverse to seeing this become a story. You pull off the Immortal aspect so nicely!

Another fascinating look at the Three Bearers. This strikes me as sort of a sequel to the Paladin in Green tale, but perhaps simply because it shares a similar feel. I enjoyed how you changed the style and look of each section and you portrayed each goddess well. I especially enjoyed Link's section, for whatever reason. It just felt right. Nice job.

An incredible story, as expected from an incredible writer ;)

Love the whole "price of Immortality" theme.
Did always strike me as odd that Ganondorf would keep coming back just to get beaten.

Very deep and meaningful as all your zeldy fanfics are.

Hoping to the gods that you make a story out of this.

Out of all three points of view, I must say I enjoyed link's the most. I guess it's because he's never faltered in his duty I guess. I enjoyed it.

This story gives a whole new twist on the reincarnation idea behind Legend of Zelda. I especially love how the Moblins became protectors of the land, rather than causing its destruction. Especially since it implies that Link is a badass, through and through, no matter what age it is.

With any luck, you won't. Moar!

Nice work!

What a clever idea - I love how their ways of thinking and communicating with their goddesses are different, and the simplicity of Link's decision compared to the other two.

I also laughed more than I probably should have at "Why are your words underlined in my journal?" ^_^

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! make a story out of this! think about it. three ancient warriors, centuries after the legends of their expoilts have faded into obscurity. modern age, lots of tech now, but no guns. LOZ and guns just dont mix in my head. Link still carries the Master sword, but in that day and age, its illegal to do so. Ganon is still a ruthless killer searching for redmeption, Zelda is a clinical, unemotionl Queen looking for the feelings she left behind, and Link, Link is still the honorable, brave young man behind the cold killer that has faced down thousands of years of war and srtife.

A Modern Land...an Ancient War...Begun Anew...

Good job !


But its a Shame, this could have been a cool Ganondorf/Zelda.

u_u


But it was awesome !

Nicely done !

great job! I love all the differnt point of views!

Well I, for one, hope that you can't prevent yourself! This was great, leaving me in awe as the rest of your Zelda stories did. I really do hope that you continue.

O_O
i hope your luck on holding out fails then, this looks really good and i would like to see it continued someday.

(stands in awe of brilliance of story)

no, seriously, A.M.AZING.

Wow. This was good. Really good. You can consider this in the 1% of fan fic that is good ;)

If you made this into a story, I would be most pleased.

good on you, that was brilliant
You should expand, i like this newer more different stlye of writing.
Don't put yourself down again or illhunt you down with an axe, i mean it. You write really well, honest