Oh, I thought that this was in Danny's pov. So, it's really in Sam's? Huh. Didn't know that.
Well at any rate, I really like you're poem. It's very angsty. Good job and keep on writing.
Whoa, that's a pretty weird dream. I wish I had depressing Danny Phantom dreams. :( Lucky...anyway, this poem is very descriptive and nice, though I must admit I was hoping it was Danny who was dying/dead. I'll just pretend it was and I'll be happy. :)
--DPSG1