don't you dare give up hope. you have not updated for 2 years so do you dare give up

OH No. Poor Suki. I think I know why she sent Suki. :D

Can't wait to find out what happens next. Have to go to bed.

I would think that Katara would at least get mad or something when Zuko mentions about capturing the Avatar. Keep writing!

Better! I'm seeing an improvement! Keep writing!

I'm really sorry but I gotta tell you not loving it. What happened? I've read "Katara's Diary" and it was really good. You're rushing things too much.

Better but still a little off. You should start another paragraph when someone different is talking.

She's falling for him too fast. Toph NEVER calls Aang "Aang" unless it's serious, same goes for the rest. She shouldn't be so girly. And let's hope for your sake that Zuko didn't hear what she said. And don't be so predictable. I'm sorry I WILL get nicer but only if you get better.

I don't know, it's a little weird. But I'll keep reading.

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GRANDBABIES!
Love it. :)

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hey i so can't wait tilt his is uypdated it's great and really nice that katra and zuko are together i think there liket he best couple eva including topha nd aang and suki and sokka lol.

Update soon, please. I love this and i want to know what happens; if Zuko's still going to get sick somehow, or what.

I just got done reading this story and its great! Hope you'll continue again soon!

COOL!! this is really good, i'm glad you updated.