This was terific. I really liked it. You got Roses character down to a T. I really hope you write more in this as a series!!

Liking it so far. A different approach as to what Rose is doing. Usually torchwood will at least use her experience. Rather nice to see them being idiots. It's different.

Till later,
rogue

You are doing a tremendous job with this. I don't know why you're not getting more reviews. Please keep writing. I'm hooked.

This story is so cool! I am totally loving the friendships between Rose, Jake and Mickey; especially the stuff between Rose and Jake, and I am very glad that Rose called Jake on his feelings for Mickey. Can't wait to see how this story is going to develop. Good work!

Excellent start. I like the tension between Rose and Pete and Mickey and Pete both; it seems very natural.