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Reviews For: The Forgiven

murmure etoile
2008-06-08
ch 1,
abuseAmazing, as usual!!
voodoo.love
2007-12-16
ch 1,
abuseHey,

Loved the story
so cute!

Love ya
Danielle
Murgy31
2007-10-05
ch 1,
abuseI loved it so much!
Kandon Kuuson
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseKinda sad in some respects. A nice ending in the end. I actaully felt sorry for Ziva the fact Tony was revealing his true nature for a little like sleeping with the college chick. You were right a bout the romance/angst genre. It was still very well written. Good work sara. kandon :)
Jaina Solo2
2007-08-18
ch 1,
abuseAngsty, but with a very cute ending. Excellent! :D
DoodleTaffy
2007-07-16
ch 1,
abuseI loved it.it was so beatiful and emotional.just the words and the conversation.so so beatiful.it almost made me cry.:)bye!please keep writing!
angelkaiss13
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abusewell this is so good
DinozzoFan
2007-04-28
ch 1,
abuseHehe, boys will be boys. GOod fan fic, an entertaining read.
Lilith
2007-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseHow great, Luna! It was so perfectly built up and so touching, in its own way. I could feel the growing tension, and it was so nice to see them opening up to one another. You definitely catch the characters essences.

Keep up your brilliant work!
ncisgirl101
2007-04-23
ch 1,
abuseaw that was SO sweet.. i like had tears in my eyes when he said that he never stopped loving her! i wish i had a guy that romantic!

loved it!!

xox ncisgirl101
Sternenlicht
2007-04-22
ch 1,
abuseThat was so cool! Though I'm not so much into TIVA (seem to have a thing for Jeanne/Tony), I so loved your story! Absolutely in character! Thing about her being able to kick his ** was great! And the ending - sweet but real! Loved that!
Brushy101
2007-04-21
ch 1,
abuseLol, I liked that, I really liked that...
boheman buddy
2007-04-21
ch 1,
abuseaww that was such a great story!
i love ur fics, especially the tiva ones
so good job!
thankyou so much
Sophie x:D
Moony's Lady
2007-04-21
ch 1,
abuseI know I've said this before, but this must be the best fic I've ever read from you (and over all, maybe). You just keep overdoing yourself, it seems.
Your writing gets better and better every time (I don't know how that is even possible) and this storyline was simply perfect. Their dialogue is very well constructed, especially Ziva's parts. You always nail perfectly every character you write.
Great, stunning job, Lune.
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