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| lilyevans-luvs-jamespotter 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abusehey. nice story. any chance u'll continue this? just wanted to point out u wrote "mesmerizing" instead of "memorising" (sry my spelling sucks too>..) along with a few more grammatical errors here and there. |
| Tracyj23 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseHee! That was wonderful! I've been meaning to read it for a while now but just hadn't gotten to it till I was scrolling through here. :) I loved your lovemaking descriptions - got the point across without being TOO graphic if you know what I mean. Less is more to me, and I like that you leave something to the imagination. I'm going to have to read more Helo/Sharon fics methinks. I'm really quite enjoying them. :) |
| blameamy 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abusehot, sexy and the end i thought was hilarious...i mean it was funny but i thought it was so funny =D |
| darkfinder 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abusealready read it love it . |