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Reviews For: Little Red Secrets

lilyevans-luvs-jamespotter
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abusehey. nice story. any chance u'll continue this?
just wanted to point out u wrote "mesmerizing" instead of "memorising" (sry my spelling sucks too>..) along with a few more grammatical errors here and there.
Tracyj23
2007-05-12
ch 1,
abuseHee! That was wonderful! I've been meaning to read it for a while now but just hadn't gotten to it till I was scrolling through here. :)

I loved your lovemaking descriptions - got the point across without being TOO graphic if you know what I mean. Less is more to me, and I like that you leave something to the imagination.

I'm going to have to read more Helo/Sharon fics methinks. I'm really quite enjoying them. :)
blameamy
2007-05-04
ch 1,
abusehot, sexy and the end i thought was hilarious...i mean it was funny but i thought it was so funny

=D
darkfinder
2007-04-26
ch 1,
abusealready read it love it .
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