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softdreamer
2009-07-16 . chapter 1
good fic
though I really don't like human experiment and clone stories but that's just me
Lluvia-the-Wolfgirl
2009-01-26 . chapter 1
LOVE. And the end was just all kinds of awesome.
Katty008
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
Waah! I wanted to know Hakuba's reaction when he well and truly found out!
Marie Ravenclaw
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Man, this series is really good. I've read this before but I forgot about it and then picked it up. It would be awesome if you could write a sequel about most of the other people's reaction, especially Hakuba's because he doesn't know anything about the BO. But if you don't, oh well, it was just a sugestion.
Kitsumi-Hime
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
Oh sweet! It's good! I love it!
LeonaWriter
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
I, as a fellow author, stubbornly say that this story is NOT finished! Hakuba still doesn't know (you left him confused) and Hattori still has to be properly punished. I like the idea that Hattori has to spill the beans.
Jessi Tsuki
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
A bit less happy, but with a sugary brainmelting ending. Is there going to be any more in this series? I love it so much. And poor Hakuba is the still clueless mattress for everyone else.

Thank you for these fics~!
DiGi -former YoshimiKurosaki-
2008-03-09 . chapter 1
Yoshimi- TAROT! ^^

Yoshimichi- Ugh...I hate fortune telling...It's so stupid...

Yoshimi- *in anger* Let me read your palm...*snatches*

Yoshimichi- HEY!

Yoshimi- Oh! Look at that! *pulls a dagger behind back*

Yoshimichi- *leans over* What?

Yoshimi- That's a pretty short life-line you have there...*smirk*

Yoshimichi- *gulp* ...shit...

-Yoshimi Kurosaki
=Yoshimichi Kurosaki
SnowCharms
2007-10-09 . chapter 1
This is a very nice story...so who is d oldest?? Hattori? N is youngest is Saguru? It's a little complicated at first...but it's really really nice to read...but who is d Ellery Queen? Is it Eve n Irene Adler? I hope that u can find time to reply me...
Yuki Tsukihana
2007-08-22 . chapter 1
mm, I love the Price You Pay series. yes, For Freedom started it all out, but I must say that For Family was the sweetest; cuddling Sherrinford Saguru at the end was adorable.

I'd love to see this continued, even though you said this was the last one, especially since there are quite a few loose ends. after all, it was never quite explained to Hakuba exactly what's going on, and it'd be hilarious to see his reaction to the whole thing. also, has Kudou's innocence been proven yet? we never really got that part cleared up.

I also notice that you stuck your fic "Gaining Watson" right in the middle of this one. bold move, Icka, bold move :3

...it also really does not help that I've been listening to 'Time After Time' on repeat when reading this trilogy. it increased the adorableness tenfold.

looking forward to more great stories from you!

~Yuki
Kari Minamoto
2007-07-14 . chapter 1
I loved this, but is there going to be another one with the reactions of Hakuba and Ran and parents etc. You could definately go farther with this!
~Kari Minamoto
chibi-luna-chan
2007-05-14 . chapter 1
Wha! What about Hakuba? I wanted to know how he reacts to the whole being an experement thing. And being related to Kaito too. The world's foremost expert on the 'International Criminal 1412' being related to the International Criminal 1412. Gotta love irony.
anonymous
2007-05-14 . chapter 1
XDD this needs at -least- an epilogue concerning Hattori's "punishment" and Hakuba's reaction to finally being let in on the whole family story.
and maybe something about just how are they gonna fix the Detectives versus Kaito Kid tensions.

Pleaase~? *puppy eyes* \*o*/
Firehedgehog
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
very cue.. any chance for yet another sequel?
Serphenia
2007-04-26 . chapter 1
YES! I've been waiting ages to see more of this, I actually reread most of your DC/MK (and Loki) fics this week because I just recently fell back into the fandom. And The Price You Pay is one of my favorites ^^

So thanks -bunches- to update this.

And...Does that mean you're -done- with The Price You Pay or will you just add more if you feel like it? I'm also quite fond of the sidestories ^^
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