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Reviews for: Lament
Konoha's Kage
2008-12-07 . chapter 1
Wow, that last part was wonderful. I was smiling.

Although, I'm glad to say Sayu won't die in your actual story...
RandomTopic
2007-12-08 . chapter 1
Interesting. Love the emotions in this fic.
Deathly Noted
2007-09-02 . chapter 1
I agree with your decision to cut this from NSSAA, because it would have totally thrown off the flow and mood of the story, but this piece is nevertheless well-written, in-character, and works quite well as a one-shot about Sayu's death. I enjoyed it very much. Please update NSSAA soon!
Duomi
2007-05-17 . chapter 1
Yes, I see how this is very out of canon. But it's understandably OOC for Light-- I like his weird reaction to Sayu's death though, it seemed like how he might be in that situation. Still, for sort of an AU thing it's nice. And also I read through all the chapters in NSSAA today and missed it already...
Martina
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Hi!! what a wonderful fic! I love our A to Z series, but this one is so good for so many reasons... pst! it says : sister's wedding" instead of sister's funeral! we! do i get a cookie for getting thata? hahaha! can I ask for more? Goodbye!
Martina
Your faithful fan!
(old letter style!)
Enma Ai
2007-04-23 . chapter 1
i love it...it was sad at the end..back to his prison
that somehow have such a depressing and sad feel to it =(

and i feel that Light would react that way to the death of a family member..confused about why he doesn't feel sad over it
because in his honest state, he probably won't be acting all devastated
Majestically Mystical
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
Oh god. It was OOC, but still, it was so wonderfully bittersweet.

M.

Absolutely lovely.
LadyKadaj
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
OMG. Deeply deeply disturbing yet I love it... Is it too much to ask for a sequel :X
quatrerw462
2007-04-21 . chapter 1
Love it!
iamtehrandom
2007-04-21 . chapter 1
Aww that's so sad and kinda depressing. T_T I was hoping he would at least cry a little. I loved this...and ur other fics too ^__^. U certainly hav a knack at writing stories XD
Ryuuzaki-hugs
2007-04-21 . chapter 1
Squee! I'm glad you posted this. Even if no one else reads this, I was happy to read it. I hope you will still keep updating NSSAA though =3
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