 Konoha's Kage 2008-12-07 . chapter 1Wow, that last part was wonderful. I was smiling.
Although, I'm glad to say Sayu won't die in your actual story... |
 RandomTopic 2007-12-08 . chapter 1Interesting. Love the emotions in this fic. |
 Deathly Noted 2007-09-02 . chapter 1I agree with your decision to cut this from NSSAA, because it would have totally thrown off the flow and mood of the story, but this piece is nevertheless well-written, in-character, and works quite well as a one-shot about Sayu's death. I enjoyed it very much. Please update NSSAA soon! |
 Duomi 2007-05-17 . chapter 1 Yes, I see how this is very out of canon. But it's understandably OOC for Light-- I like his weird reaction to Sayu's death though, it seemed like how he might be in that situation. Still, for sort of an AU thing it's nice. And also I read through all the chapters in NSSAA today and missed it already... |
 Martina 2007-04-24 . chapter 1 Hi!! what a wonderful fic! I love our A to Z series, but this one is so good for so many reasons... pst! it says : sister's wedding" instead of sister's funeral! we! do i get a cookie for getting thata? hahaha! can I ask for more? Goodbye!
Martina
Your faithful fan!
(old letter style!) |
 Enma Ai 2007-04-23 . chapter 1i love it...it was sad at the end..back to his prison
that somehow have such a depressing and sad feel to it =(
and i feel that Light would react that way to the death of a family member..confused about why he doesn't feel sad over it
because in his honest state, he probably won't be acting all devastated |
 Majestically Mystical 2007-04-22 . chapter 1Oh god. It was OOC, but still, it was so wonderfully bittersweet.
M.
Absolutely lovely. |
 LadyKadaj 2007-04-22 . chapter 1OMG. Deeply deeply disturbing yet I love it... Is it too much to ask for a sequel :X |
 quatrerw462 2007-04-21 . chapter 1Love it! |
 iamtehrandom 2007-04-21 . chapter 1Aww that's so sad and kinda depressing. T_T I was hoping he would at least cry a little. I loved this...and ur other fics too ^__^. U certainly hav a knack at writing stories XD |
 Ryuuzaki-hugs 2007-04-21 . chapter 1Squee! I'm glad you posted this. Even if no one else reads this, I was happy to read it. I hope you will still keep updating NSSAA though =3 |