Aww it was so sweet, and so sad. I hate sad...T_T Great story though. Nicely done. ^_^

Aw, that's sad. I have to say, though, the effect was slightly spoiled by how abrupt her death was. I'm glad they at least confessed before she did die, however. A good, though quite sad (it IS a tragedy after all...) story. Then again, my opinion may be skewed by the fact that I almost NEVER read tragedy stories...

Oh my gosh..
That was so beautiful!!
Its so..so..argh! dammit so cute I loved it. Please make another Oneshot of the two..xD