I live in Iowa as well.

The Corn Yeti is a fearsome beast that also enjoys the warm sandy beaches of Tahiti when fierce winters hit the midwest.

beware of glowing eyes in the deep darkness of corn fields.

I'm confused. I'm from Iowa and I've never heard of this "corn yeti". Is this a story specific to some part of Iowa?

ah, adventure and action to the end. AMAZING story! i really liked it, quite exiting at times too.

so keep writing Heater, because i will read your stories! ;D
and as usual nothing to complain about here Heater :)

GREAT story!

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chris

Nice - at least he got his voice back!

One thing I don't understand...why can't Carson seem to speak? The eyesight and hearing I get, but articulation? Beautifully written, though - I have to go get some hot chocolate before I read the next chappie!

Wonderful discription of a frozen wasteland...Br!

A really great read filled with brilliant characterisations and dramatic action. But could there be more Wraith worshippers in stories to come? Hope so.

This was such a thrilling chapter with all the action of the chase. Poor Rodney; I hope he'll be put out of his misery soon.

How on earth are they going to get out of this one? I imagine Shep and co. must have a part in this, but how...? Even with all the anxiety I so enjoy how you throw in those little splashed of humour as with your very last line.

Can the situation deteriorate any further? I have a feeling that it can. Just loved the imagery "...about as well as a screen door held water." I've never come across that simile before. Nice one.

As I prepared this evening's meal I started to think, 'that was a mistake' leaving Teyla behind instead of Ronon, but then when I thought about it more I realised I was doing a disservice to Teyla (as well as Sheppard) and in fact the author was absolutely right in the choice. The bitterly harsh elements would have'made it essential for Ronon to accompany Shep. So I'm at peace with the plot and now that I've reached the end of this chapter I'm beside myself worrying what will happen to Carson, McKay and Teyla, not forgetting Shep and Ronon.

I just love your portayal of Rodney and the lines he comes out with are outrageously perfect. Even in such dire circumstances I still can't help laughing out loud when he starts being the unbearable grouch - you portay him to perfection.

A small crinkle of apprehension just trickled down my back at the mention of Jones. Am I right to be concerned. It would surely be too good to be true that he isn't more sinister.

Not only is the setting portrayed so well but the action too. And I'm desperate to know who is the killer whilst worrying about Carson!

The descriptions of this frozen terrain are excellent. I live in a country which today is 40 degrees Celsius and yet I'm almost shivering as I read this story!

Good story, really liked it, will we know more about this so called wraith worshipers?
The only thing I was not to happy is that of all of them, sheppard did nothing to help and ended up getting hurt in such well unhero like way? lol if that makes sence, I mean yes considering the place and accident was bound to happen, but I guess I wished it was saving the moment, I also wish to know what where they doing in that planet to begin with.

But overall I love the story kept me very interested, would love to read a sequel.