I really liked it! My only complaint would be that it should have been longer :)

Not bad at all. I like Master Splinter ^^ Although I do think Raph came out a little too out of character (way too submissive; not that I don't believe Leo would be the same, cause he would). That and you have a plot that could easily be lengthened and themes that need to be elaborated. The story moved a little too quickly, jumping from one idea to the next without much in the way of transition.

But overall I think this story was really good, it just needs a few tweaks ^_^

kinda sappy but very sweet. ^_^ i do love happy endings.

Wrong, on so many levels. The story isn't written badly, although some parts could do with some editing. Anyway...the whole incest thing between TEENAGE MUTANT NINJA TURTLES...Oh, boy. :/ ?