ouch...but since when has there been guns there? lol but AW how sweet

Hey, this is a much better improvment on the last chapter you wrote on this chapter (if you get what I mean.) This chapter makes me wonder, why doesn't Anna what to be a dragon rider? Strange...
love B~H

Nice chapter. I'm glad you got a beta, I think everyone needs one. Will you make your future chapters longer?

i love it!

Can you PLEASE do a favour for me? You really need to make you chapters longer! They are over two fast, and I get sad cause then I need to wait for the next ones come... and... and... I don't like waiting!

Love Battleground Heart

AH i get it now! ;)
Thingy, YOU ROCK MY VARIOUS TOE SOCKS!

YAY! B-but what happened to the other chapter?

MARY SUE!

OH. MY. BOB. WHERE DO YOU GET YOUR IDEAS?! Cause seriously, if it like a shop or something, i wanna go there...
PINK EGG YAY!
I don't have any suggestions for it, cause i like it a lot. If you like, i could be your betta?? S'only cause i know how much i could use one right now lol...
i still think the chapters are kinda short, but then again i'm only satisfied with nine-page chapters, so you can't really win.
Maybe when shes thinking stuff, you could put it in italics, or bold or something. Or maybe single quotation marks ('hi'), so it isn't so blended. LOVE IT! ^_^
Emmeline