Hey I loved the chapter. Great fight scene. I loved Kimie in this. Will she see shego soon? Does she realy understand what is going on? What happens next?

holy bajolies! dude cant wait to read more

Please tell me u will continue this story! I been tryin to find it and now that i have i want more. I hope u can continue this is great. Thanks from the crazy girl.^_^

Good story line, little to no spelling errors, awsome story one way or the other, I like it! Can't wait for the next part.

20 years huh? Shego didn't age did she? You have to make her not age, fire doesn't age.

First of all, I love the narrative trick you did, you didn't divided the dialogs as you usually do because you wanted to confuse who is who on the scenes, and also the words conected in such way that ending dialog of one scene fit rigth in the following scene! That is clever! X3

Poor Ryujin, he will be chased for some really hardcore characters there... Joss and the BeeBees are bad enough but Hyperion and Shadow Hand too? poor guy ^^;

It looks like everyone is trying to get Kim back as soon as they can! Terrifict chapter my friend!! *w00t*

I wonder why Ryu move to retrieve Kim and to whom? because Joss was already there? O_o ...I can't wait to see the next part!! X3

While I liked the first chapter, I am not that happy with the others. The future fate of the characters, except Ryuji, is introduced rather casually. The surprise moment is largely gone already. We know that Shego and Junior are opposed to each other, who works for them, that Wade is involved. Maybe it would have been better to present this brave new world through Kim's eyes, to wonder together with her, to be surprised, and share her fears and despair. Many things are just introduced too casually so far.

Sorry, nothing against you mate, and your writing style is quite good. I'll keep reading and see what you will come up with next chapters.

Damn, Kim´s been asleep for 20 years?! That kinda reminds me of Garfield the cat only without the comical parts.

Well I take it that Ron is married to Yori then?

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omg I read the basic plot for this from the picture a while ago, and I had REALLY REALLY hoped that someone would write it, so I was SOSOSO happy when I found this x3

can't wait for more! the past chapters have been great

WOW! This is cool. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

An interesting Story. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes.

I have seen the artwork of YogurthFrost, and I like his style, so seeing what you are adding to the mix to tie his different pieces together is great.

I do think chapter 3 (and to a lesser extent, chapter 2) could have benefitted from section breaks. Nothing fancy, but enough to know when the scene changes. It tends to get kinda jumpy.

All in all, a dynamic foray into the Kim Possible fandom, and I look forward to more.

I'm glad to see that you're going to continue this idea. I'm familiar with yogurth's drawings that this is based off of, so I know who rescued Kim. Anyway, keep this story going.

One last thing. I don't know how many years in the future this takes place, but I'm pretty sure that SSJ would have finally figured out that he's gay by now.

Interesting. I would like to read more please.

KEWL!

Commander Possible, Joss's Bucking Broncos, S3, and Vivian as a villian: a great second chapter to showcase this 'brave new world.' But, roaches and the blue flash...could it be...NAA, not a mature Ronald Dean Stoppable!?

Eagerly awaiting more...

...cpneb

Well I did NOT see this coming, I mean I expect a chapter with Ron and Shrgo overwelmed by Kim's death/dissapperance.

But I wasn't expecting a battle scene by minor characters.

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