A great story. I liked the part where they were taking care of Gil.

Ok, I was so confused at first. Eventually I caught on, but talk about playin' mind games. I liked how you worked in all the different characters. Very unique. Very good.

A wonderful original idea and it came off well as well.

"Sara.

It’s a good thought."

Great closing "line" (phrase?). Great job.

hey I really liked this fic! The way you included Vincent Lurie, Holly Gribs and Hank; at first I thoughth I was reading an AU (silly me). I liked the way you explain everything in the end. Any way, your fic is original and really good, thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work.

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I...uh..i'm a little confused. So is Grissoms son dead? Is Grissom dying? Is Sara having an affair with Hank? What the hell is going on!? It's very confusing. And i thought Holly Gribbs was Dead. Who's Vincent? blah...nevermind.

That confused me for a little while! So awesome! I like confused!

Interesting idea

that was good, but also very, very, very, very strange. i liked it tho.

Welcome back. I’ve missed your uniquely dark and tortured style. I found the way you portrayed Grissom during his atropine induced hallucination absolutely fascinating. It’s like he knows he’s not supposed to be a loser and can definitely sense there’s something wrong but everything is conspiring against him. Very nice work. You never cease to surprise me. I never know what to expect with your stories and I think that’s what I enjoy the most about your writing. Now I can’t stop whistling the opening credits from an old Australian TV show ;-)

It's great to see you writing for CSI again. As usual, you've taken a unique plot direction and run with it. Inherent in the hallucinations is the suggestion that somehow, somewhere, Grissom has underlying feelings of inadequacy in his relationship with Sara. As much as I loved the ending, I'd love to see you explore this in a companion piece. [Do you take requests? ;) ]

Anyway -- great job. Thanks!