Darn it. It was so good. I need you to possibly make one more, or as more as it could, the better. see? my grammar is totally incoherent after reading the fic, my mind was practically blown up, and if that wasn't a good thing, I don't know what is. Thank you for writing.

It's really good! I just wish there was more Isaac/Felix stories; they're so cute together!

"“You were always the leader, Felix,” Isaac interrupted. “All I ever did was answer questions whenever people asked me. That’s how we made our way around before we met up with you.”" I loved and laughed at that line. :P

I wasn't gonna review, but then I would suck! XD Jk. This is my favorite pairing as well, so I get sad not finding many fics about them... I really enjoyed this fic!

I did read this and like it and I reviewed, so I don't suck, do I? ;)
That being said... I am not in a fit state to give any constructive crit, so I'll just say it was good and go sleep XD

that was really good. you should write more. or another gs fanfic. there really arent enough of these kind of fics for gs. nice job!

XD Finally some earthship! This pairing is seriously lacking. Seriously.

It's good to see someone write some nice pointless fluff for the cute gay boys :D And kudos for recognizing your not-questioning-themselves-plothole. Just for that you can have a cyber-cookie :D

I love this pairing its just a shame there arent more of them!
So does this mean (cause i reviewed) that i dont suck??
lol

Sweet I really did like this so i'm reviewing,
as to not have the rath of the mighty
Yoru Ryu who i admire at SA so much.
-Hyperactiveice

Nice. I like that it wasn't that sappy. romance is alright, but sap is evil...

Oh and Isaac is a blond. If it's a boy, or the hair itself, there's no e. Girls are blonde. Just saying...

Aww, don't worry. Shonen ai/Yaoi is cuter anyways. I love this pairing myself, so no worries there.

Well, I just wanted to point some mistakes out, as a small little critique in writing. X3

"In two years the village of Vale had been relocated several miles south of it’s original home at the foot of Mt Alph. It had taken a lot of backbreaking hard work and toil to get the settlement to it’s current state."

In this paragraph, you mispelled "Mt. Aleph", but that's okay. I knew what you meant. People that aren't GS fans may not know what the dush you're talking about, but next time, try to spell check or re-read your stories over and over until you catch some mistakes.

I try to do that, and it usually works. Sorry if I sound demanding. o_O

Next...

"Four of it’s original villagers; Isaac, Jenna, Garet and Felix as well as one of their companions, Piers."

Well, the one thing that got me was the "it's" part. It's the wrong one; I'm sure you meant "its". It's = It is, as in contraction and saying like: "It's a WONDERFUL day!!" (which it isn't today). "Its" is the possessive noun, and it would go perfectly here: "Four of its original villagers;". Does that make it better?

That was another thing that made me stop and think kind of. ^^;

Other than those, I really enjoyed your story.
Keep working at it. You're a great writer. I'll love to read more shonen ai/yaoi from you. ^_^

Naww~ *hug*
~Jess/Roy-Chibi

Aw! I like it :)

Yay for blue popsicles, -Bowleena

*laughs* I read this on purpose and loved it. I do like this pairing. It's not one that I normally search out, but I do like it. It's sweet and well-written, even with some of the plot-holes, etc. ^_^

Aww, so cute!

This is a good one-shot. Fluffy! needs moar Earthshipping.