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| InsaneFanGirl 2008-10-05 ch 1, | abuseI love how nice and sweet this story is. Bubbles and the Mayor are defintly the most loveable and clueless characters on the show. It must of been hard to write a story like this but you really pulled it off! |
| Kitty-Euphoria 2008-08-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's amazing. |
| sweetysmart0505 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseQuite cute actually. I was unsure about it, but I rather enjoyed that. |
| NigaleCross 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI was going to run away when I first saw this. I'm glad I didn't. The story kept the innocence between the Mayor and Bubbles seemed belivable and implied there was more to both of them than what meets the eye. |
| The Illustrious Crackpot 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting...kinda sweet too, and you managed to write the Mayor in character even with the overall serious tone of it. Nice job! |
| LM Simpson 2007-07-26 ch 1, | abuse(claps with a pleasant smile) I'm a crackpairing fan, so when I found this, I clicked on it in a heartbeat. Having read your previous works before, I knew I was in for a treat. Well, let me tell you: You didn't fail me, nor my expectations. You actually made it WORK. And let's face it, that's essential for any crackpairing. I don't think I could execute this as well as you did. (Throws toast and decides to look at your MojoxBlossom fics in the very near future) Have a good day! Kady the Red Panda |
| Queen Datsuh 2007-05-08 ch 1, | abuseWow this has comedy, drama, 'romance', and angst. It was awesome and so sad at the same time. Both having to keep up appearances and use their own 'pick me up drug' to keep them happy (or seemingly happy). Bubbles has the Mayor. The Mayor has her and pickles. I wonder how his words of anguish will affect her? Hm. Excellent job on character portrayal and making the emotions jump from the page as you made the plot flow smoothly. You're writing's really good. Keep it up. |
| w 2007-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is just vile. go fuck yourself. |
| CazBM 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseYou just can't stop to making such good stories can ya? =D aaww I always believed in this love! Bubbles and Mayor were meant to be together!^^ (as you can get by my story "forced pregnancy" - though I put some drama in this) -x and again, you just got the characterization soo right! Bubbles one, Mayor one... her peaceful personality, his eh... not really smart thoughts? lol!^^ will they admit this love?? please? say they will!?? =D *looking for new chappie!* |
| WLiiAfanatic 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWell, that's definitely one hell of a pairing! Can't say I could ship this one as easily as I did Mojo/Blossom, but I still really enjoyed reading this! |
| Dracori 2007-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI know I already reviewed this at LJ but I'm sure you wouldn't mind hearing it again :D This was wonderfully written and so well put together that it actually makes the pairing work. Granted, had anyone else taken a shot at this pairing...well...I think we can both say most probably couldn't pull it off. And again, it's so nice to see something different in the PPG fandom :) |
| SkinnySlim22 2007-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to admit, I cringed a little when I read the pairing. (This is coming from a Mojo/Blossom lover, mind you). However, I suppressed my apprehensions and read this fanfiction...and adored it. Yes, that's right. I loved it. It's very well-written, lyrical, but most of all, believable: that is, you portrayed their relationship in a way that didn't make me raise an eyebrow and wonder "Why would anyone think this was a good idea?" (and there have been fics like that, believe me). All in all, one of the better PPG fics I've read recently (sorry, no love for RRB/PPG shipping from this fellow). You ought to be proud of yourself. |