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Reviews for: A Delicate Request
Fs
2007-04-23 . chapter 1
Really sweet! Glad you put 'not what you're thinking' in your summary or would never have read this and I'm so pleased that I did.
A. C. Mathur
2007-04-23 . chapter 1
I always did think Amber and Tony had great voices, and a duet would be perfect.
The 42
2007-04-23 . chapter 1
This is a beautiful little story, I'd love to see it continuted.

One thing- watch your italics. The proper way to put the italics tags in is to set them in [brackets], but if that doesn't work, try . Also, i'm not sure if this makes any difference, but do it with lowercase i's.

[i]That means that either this should work [/i]
Or this should
Yoda1976
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
This was good. I can see Giles being self concious about it.
Sink
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
First of glad you mentioned in the description that it wasn't what it sounded like other wise I never would of read this and I am so glad I did read this because it is such a sweet little cute fic you have written. You really portrayed Giles exactly the way I think he would of acted in this situation and same goes for Tara to. You did great with this. Just one small tiny little thing in most of the fic you kept putting *I* in front of an action or a thought the characters were having and honestly it doesn't need to be there, hope I haven't offended you and thats just my opinion which is coming from some one who has never written fic before. I really did enjoy reading this and I hope you write more if not making this fic longer than starting another fic :) Oh have you ever thought about writing a Buffy/Tara pairing? *grins* sorry im addicted to that pairing at the moment :)and I have no shame *lol*
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