Brillant Story. This is one of the most original that I have ever read. I can't wait till your next update

Whoo another chapter, I love this story.

I love the fact that in this one Harry's twin is good. Also does Harry have a scar? And what about his illness?
Please update, I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I've been wondering why Harry doesn't verbally accuse the headmaster of his many manipulative deeds - in many ways, it could be said his actions are aimed at *making sure* Harry dies, not helping him at all - in front of the whole great hall. Rumor has power in the Wizarding World and if the Ministry got wind that Harry hated the Headmaster, surely they'd be more inclined to support him?

Argh the angst it burns.

I guess that answers the question of why he hasn't had Fawkes use his tears to cure him. But can you explain in more detail why? What if he swallowed the tears? Would that make a difference? I would consider this story to be a 2x ultimate favorite, and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

GR DUMBledore. c'mon harry pull through.
i like the story, i hope you'll update soon. can't wait to find out what happens next.

Wow, nice to see the boys finally directing that aggression...you know, personally I think it may be best if Harry does die...as Harry. Especially considering the fact that Harry is a twin, and as such his very soul is intertwined with Ben's...And honestly, living for the rest of eternity without the other half of one's soul is a horrible way to exist. Because you can tell that Fawks suffers and I don't think him and his brother were twins. At this point, I'm of the opinion that while there are Light and Dark wizards/witches, Light and Darkness are not synonyms for good and evil. The terms are totally separate and as far as I'm concerned, all the living wizards in control of Ben and Harry's lives at this moment are evil. Yep.

Just to let you know this story makes me cry or has been for the last 3 chapters of course some are from frustration. I can't really hate your Dumbledore for some reason, I get ** off like crazy and frustrated but no hatred more like disgust. I'm surprised Harry made it so long although now that I think about it month and half seems right for some reason when reading it seemed longer...

I really love your OCs, and how you handle your characters, you don't bash them but still make it easy to dislike them, don't know if that makes sense. Ugh Dumbledore's been really getting me though. Like it's obvious that they're not trying to help/ save Harry again. But damn, Ben's little speech? Dang that was good.

o
update son
loved the story

intesting. i look forwards to the next chapter

whoops ignore that I just realized it was Damien, not Ben...sorry takes me a while to separate new characters...

Um...I think you made a mistake somewhere. In the first chapter you said Ben had brown eyes, but in the second he has green. Other than that the story's is great so far. I do wonder if a burning day could cure Harry of his illness...or permanently trap him as a phoenix...

Oh. WOW! That was tremendous! Please don't stop! I loved the interaction with "Eri" and Hedwig, and the Thorn/Eri territory battle was hilarious! Thanks so much! I can't wait to see if Dumbledore will ever get rid of that infernal bracelet! Poor, poor Harry! And to think that if Dumbledore would actually do something Harry could have had relief already if it wasn't for the man's disgusting display of resistance! Can't they see the damage their doing, and especially since it hasn't been all that long since Harry has been "blocked" from changing into Eri and taking Muggle Pain Relievers? I can't wait to see what you do with this story next, because I REALLY REALLY don't want to see Harry die but so far it isn't looking promising as of yet. Though, when we consider what the story title is I'm assuming (and I'm probably WAY off here) that Harry, if he were to die, would be able to "come back" since his Animagus form hints to him being REBORN? Well I guess I'll have to wait for the rest and see what happens. Thanks!

The only thing I have against this story is all of the ... er... more showy signs of affection shown through the brothers. Um... I don't think of myself as prejudice but sometimes, through the way its written, I feel like the kisses and other things seem almost like between lovers. *cringe* Now I'm not saying that to show that I hate the love that the brothers feel for each other, please don't misunderstand me! But sometimes it feels like they're a little more touchy-feely than what I'd write, personally. I hope you don't take offense, its only just my opinion after all. It's very understandable the hows and whys the brothers have for each other (especially with Ben and Harry's VERY strong link) and their sisters, but I've just had the thought that I don't recall the boys ever giving their younger twin sisters kisses on the forehead or cheek like Harry, Benji and Damy share with each other. It just affects me sometimes. But I do have to say that I LOVED the part where Harry finds the WWII airplane! That was a GREAT part! I loved it, it was so sweet and touching! Very good!

Um, I still really love this story so I hope I haven't turned you off of my opinion now! So please remember the NICE things I've said and just take the other comments as me expressing my feelings! Thank you for all the effort and time you've out into this story! I'm loving it!

~bkwrmgrl87

Wow, this is totally awesome!

this is a great story, i cant wait to see what happens next