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Gundum M 2/23/05 . chapter 1
i have no idea what's going on in this story.
Final-Fan 4/3/02 . chapter 1
This is very very good stuff, not the belly-laugh kind of funny but a different kind.

There's one thing bugging me though: since Ryoga obviously isn't the soon-to-be-Lost young god (unless that blast blew him up to be reincarnated), I guess that would be his father? Or some ancestor, since both of his parents have the "lost gene"?

And lastly: nitpicker and excellent speller that I am, I respectfully point out that the word is spelled "feud".
gourrinachan 7/15/01 . chapter 1
this great stuff i wonder do you have more?
Dane 7/11/01 . chapter 1
Cute. Real cute.
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