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wert1990
2009-09-21 . chapter 7
please continue this storry
masaki yang yi1
2009-03-05 . chapter 7
All in all a great story,please write more chapter's.
There was just one thing that I need to ask about nd that was why didn't Akane or at least Nabiki go after Ranma? I know that his/her father did go after Ranma,but what stopped Nabiki from following Genma?
JustinD
2009-02-15 . chapter 7
good chapter
Rune Tobor
2009-02-05 . chapter 7
Just read the story for the first time. It is pretty good, and I think you do angsty romance fairly well. Some do Major WAFF and that is ok in small amounts, but Ranma is an angsty story in cannon. It is billed as a martial arts/comedy/romance but is really a martial arts/tragi-comedy/romance/satire. Tragic because the only way out in cannon is for Ranma to die. Satire because in real life I doubt honor works as it does in Ranma. Crossovers like this are so common because they are the only way to resolve things. All the cannon characters are locked in a repeating cycle of events and need someone new to break the cycle for them. Please write more, thanks.
Frank
2009-01-23 . chapter 7
I really enjoyed this fanfic. Thanks so much for writing it and I look to hopefully reading more sometime in the future :).
Guardoflight
2009-01-14 . chapter 7
it was a nice story, defiantly different from the other crossover but it still is very well done and it is interesting how you done the characters.

I liked how you linked how Futaba and Ranma met with the and the 'present'.

I do hope to see more soon
dogbertcarroll
2008-12-07 . chapter 7
I'm sure you have something sinister in mind for the photo, but considering the fact that Misake and Futa had been dating for years before, anyone who sees the picture will assume it's just an old photo from when the two were together.

Nabiki managed to replace the driver? She's the one I most suspect would try something like that. Frankly the fire power Ranma can level against personal threats, added to whatever he's manages to teach Futa, guarantees pain for anyone trying to kidnap them.
dogbertcarroll
2008-12-07 . chapter 2
I don't recall Ranma going into a stunned happy crying jag on meeting Herb who could change sexes.
dogbertcarroll
2008-12-07 . chapter 1
Not really into Yaoi, but I'll see how the story goes.
Rogue7
2008-12-03 . chapter 7
Great story so far, loving the characterisations even if it's a bit mushy at times ;)
Schwarzdrache
2008-07-26 . chapter 7
A different style, true, but it seems to be working out fairly well. I rather like the tale, at the least. My curiosity, to some extent, lends me to wonder how it will affect some of your longer tales which seem long since abandoned. Been reading your works for a couple of years, and hope that the Muse continues to bless your writing style. Both well written and well done, for a pleasant change that has more character development than just jumping from one fight to the next. I applaud ye.
Awlric Hayell
2008-06-22 . chapter 7
Yet again, you continue to amaze me. You are to Ranma fanfiction What Fosfor-sama is to Bleach and Naruto. You WIN completely
NightmareSyndrom
2008-06-03 . chapter 7
You best not abandon this story like you did most of your other ones. It's to good to die!
marco
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
I wouldn't be surprised if Genma ends up working and saving up money for Ranma before Ranma becomes a model. Downpayment for their cozy home. It would explain why two rich models have a small place.
Howard Russell
2008-04-17 . chapter 7
Great addition to one of my favorite fics! Thanks for writing it.
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