o i never thought of it from his point of veiw. this is really good by da way

This is perfect. I've never read a Billy fic before, but you did this really well. It's so deep for such a minor character.

poor Billy...

This is perhaps belated as praise, but I just ran across this, and wow, it really was both good, and intense. I'm going to look around and see if you've done any other one shot POVs because I really liked this one.

poor billy. please update

Excellent work! This is the first time I've read an account from Billy's perspective. I must say, you've captured his voice marvelously!

So, you have more stories from Billy's POV?

Very well done.

It's good to see an author giving voice to Billy's point of view, and you did it expertly.

Loved the prose style, 'he was now just a shadow, the smoky remains of an extinguished light.'

It's lyrical, descriptive and perfect.

Hmm... this is a great insight into Billy's mind.

That was rather amazing. I've never read a Billy POV, but I must say you captured him rather well.

That was good! I never really considered Billy's point of view, yet there was so much he could be thinking.

I never thought of what Billy must feel like... oh poor Billy! It's an amazing story!

This was really well done. My heart is breaking for Jacob, for Billy, and for Charlie.

Great story! It's always nice to 'hear' from minor characters!

This is the first story I've read from Billy Black's perspective that seemed right. I'm really glad somebody finally decided to write his perspective in a way that made sense. It's very fluid and believable. I loved how you used the line from the book at the end to tie it all together.

That was impressive. Where to begin...The switching between protective father and protective leader...wonderful. The longing for Jacob to have a normal life. Brilliant. I just can't say enough. The strictness to detail brought out by remembering that the pack thought Victoria was Laurent's Mate...perfect. Truely a wonderful Fanfiction.

~Pompeii