|Reviews for History: It's Just One Thing After Another|
| Aiden Paine 4/19/08 . chapter 3
Nice story. i haven't read past the third chapter, but it seems to be building into a great adventure. can't wait to see who the fourth element is. keep up the good work.
(not to be a stickler, but you should probably think about editing for errors a bit more)
| Mystique-Jay 8/3/07 . chapter 1
Its really good so far. The descriptive words are magnificent. It is very interesting.