LaughableBlackStorm
2007-06-17
ch 1,  | abuse*blinks* I ... I can't believe nobody's reviewed yet! This one-shot is absolutely amazing! I love how you used time-travel subtly instead of going "Hey, everyone, I'm from twenty years in the future!" You wrote it very very well. It's a tad bit confusing at first, although after I thought about it for a few minutes I understood what exactly happened. I don't suggest you go change it to make it clearer, though - it's perfect as it is. Gives a nice feeling and atmosphere to the writing ^.^ You characterized everyone very well as well, and I congratulate you on that. I could honestly go on forever! Great work, I love it! |
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