Very well-written. I really enjoyed it- good job!

This was an absolutely fantastic piece! You are a very talented writer and I was riveted as I read every word. Thank you for posting this story!

very good*.*

i could feel what claire felt. which means it's well written.

i love Paire, so thanks for the story.

I don't really mind incest.

very cute story- good work!

aw. so cute. one of the best Paire's I've read.

WOW! thats all i can say/... uh-may-zing.

This was such a gorgeously angsty and passionate story-fabulous work :)

Wah! Why does it cut off? ;_; I was really enjoying that.

Is Claire really 17? A lot of fics seemed to say so, but I always thought she was 14 or 15. And I would have estimated Peter's age as more like 24/25, or even younger. Which would make the age gap between them still about 10 years, unless Claire really is 17, in which case it'd be a bit smaller.

aw.

:DD

I love this! It's really great. I just started watching Heroes (yeah, I know I'm late comer to the show) and fell in love with this pairing before I knew I shouldn't. Opps, oh well, now the couple is my OTP in this fandom and a little incest is not going to change that. Anyway, I love the way you ended this.

liked that, thanks for posting. the slow build up was good

wow, this was strong. it left me breathless too. really wonderful

Yeah. So, here's the thing; I love you.

I have decided you write the best Paire in the world. You don't come up with silly excuses to explain away their blood-lines, but it's not all angsty reflection, either. You aren't afraid to write hard scenes that most people couldn't do half as well as you, and you have the characters so beautifully in the palm of your hand...

I'm getting redundant.

What would I have to do to get you to write Paire full-time?

This is the BEST Peter/Claire story ever! Wow. Bravo.

so amazing and full of depth. flowing, discriptive & brilliant.

Ja Ne! :D :)

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