god damn beautiful, filled with inspiration and angst and good old fashioned paire. excuse me while i go watch the new heroes episode!AGAIN! (damn people ended it when i was so into it)

inspire16

Wow!

First off, I have to admit I'm not much of a Paire fan; never was.

Even so, this story was AMAZING! I could literally feel the tension between them, and got really into it.

Very well done!

that was so cute... you have such good inner-monolgue stuff.. haha i suck at that. You should continue this story or start another one.

Loved it! I'm a Paire fan, too despite all the circumstances conspiring against them. Great writing-could totally see it happening (or at least dream it!)

Wow... like seriously WOW. This blew my mind. What can I say about this that isn't already self-explanatory? It's beautiful, moving and there was so much emotion that I literally felt it; Claire's pain about how it feels when you love someone you can't have. I swear I nearly teared a bit myself.

A couple lines I thought were amazing highlights:

There are reasons why Claire Bennett should not love Peter Petrelli; they are the same reasons why Peter Petrelli should not love Claire Bennett.

And the last line: Neither knows what is going to happen the next day or the day after that. They only know that they will not be facing it alone.

Beautiful... really well done is all I can say.

Jini

Wow, that was amazing! It totally sucks they're related, or are they?