Beautiful story :D

Oh I'm just on chapter 1 but I'm loving it already. Funny Pan cutting her hair like that and changing her wardrobe... I done the exact same thing when me and my bestfriend who became my boy-friend broke up. Only thing he was the one to break it off with me and he never spoke to me again and didn't came to school for AGES! I also got gang-bashed for my change of wardrobe because I had gone goth. Funny our world isn't it? It's full of such surprises that just keep you wanting to see the next day! :-) Cn't complain though things like these keep life interesting, you gota love it! Anyway I so love this fic but I'm gona have to stall reading it for awhile because my lil sis has craped her pants and I need to change it EEW Now that is a surprise that I could do without...

aw...

that was such a sweet story

i loved it to bits

it was funny, confusing, caring, fustrating and so, perfect

i just loved it

its the best story ever!

you have to write more stories quick

i'm desperate to read more!

omg...that is one of the best fics i've ever read...it is so sweet...kinda short...but then again id rather it be short and good then long and boring...i luv the way u write even the names of the chapters ...i thought it was unique..this was SO good...(omg)thanx for the good read!

That was a wondeful story! I absolutely loved it and the horror novelist reminded me of my uncle. Oh, but there were a few things you might want to look at. "...yet he couldn't hold onto the thing that meant the most to him; Pan." (You prolly should of used a ":" after 'him' and before 'Pan' not a ";".) "He should have run after her; done anything..." (And there instead of using a ";" you prolly should use a ",".) The last thing that was through out the story was you said "of coarse", but you prolly should have used "course" because the other one is like something you can feel. Ex: The fabric was coarse. Take my word for it. Figured you might want to know. Anyways... I loved your story and I'll make sure to add it to my fav. list! Thanks for writing it!

I really liked this cute story...I have always liked the idea of pan and trunks... great story...

I ThInK ThIs WaS A GrEaT StOrY. I LOVeD It BuT ThEn AgAiN I LoVe AlL YoUr WoRk SO Far..

ThE EnDiNg Is My FaV. PaRt WiTh ThE DeDiCaTiOn, It'S SwEeT!

KeEp Up ThE Go0d WoRk!:)

I was reading your story Can i take Your Order and on chap 5 you were talkin about how some people called drinks soda's or pops. well in australia we call them soft drinks . Isn't that wierd?

My account was taken so I can't sign, but oh well.

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Great fic, even though this was done a while ago, I still got to read it. VERY cute!

SO CUTE! *squeals* Keep up the great work!

P*of*L

Great story, can't wait to finish it!

Awwww...that was really sweet, as ever! Sigh...I dream of being an author...it would so totally rock.

Anyhow, great job hun! It's about time you went ot my favorites list!

i loved that ending part but pan is not the girly type to wear tight nighties and i hate the name zach but all in all it was great! ja!

pans not like that i have seen GT and she is not gay like you! ja !

baka! goten and bra are a couple marrons a gay blond chestnut and i would hate to be her kid! it was good though ! ja ne!