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kittykatpunkrap
2009-06-04 . chapter 8
OMFA THAT WAS AWESOME
i almost died from all the 'awwing' and 'oh snap' ing and cries of'NO' i was doing when i was reading. I liked the ending it was so sweet.
Pinuiini
2009-02-14 . chapter 8
aw that was cute
SugarMutantNinjaHamsterGirl
2009-01-07 . chapter 8
I love this story so much. This was absolutely the best! :D (LOL, hair condoms and the string bean looking guy!! xD)
Rockinpandabear
2009-01-01 . chapter 8
Man this story completely rocked my proverbial socks. The best thing about it is, other than the kick ** plot, is that I found almost no spelling errors. Roxas and Axel's "mind-powers" as I call them were actually quite cool. Hehe...man I would use the whole zap thing, depite the intense guilt I'd feel later.

On another note, I agree with what you said on an earlier chapter about Sora. He's not a total ** or a completely naive guy. He can be rude and a badass at times. After all he probably wouldn't have completed his journey yeah?

Ahem back on topic, check ya on your next stories =]
Minikimii
2008-12-27 . chapter 8
Man hugs really are just slapping on the back and manly grunting. Lawl.
Minikimii
2008-12-27 . chapter 6
Kairi. Bleh.
Eww.

(That's it.)
Minikimii
2008-12-27 . chapter 5
Hair condom!! XD

Gods, I love your writing!!
Minikimii
2008-12-27 . chapter 4
Oh mi gawd. I want the number for Riku's House of Man Love. I know some boys that would DIE to go there!!

XD
Minikimii
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
SOB Institute, Riku’s School, against NOOB Seminary, my school.


Oh mi gawd. Lawl. Loving this!
dragonmisteress
2008-12-23 . chapter 8
wow. that was really good! I really enjoyed all of the different points of view. it put a totally new twist on the story to see each scene from everyone's point of view! Props to you, dear author! ^^
sweetangel03
2008-11-12 . chapter 7
xD TEEN TITANS GO!
OMG! I cracked at that one and even my mom asked of I was okay..
I love your story soo much it has alot of drama and stuff xD
Xentith
2008-11-10 . chapter 8
AHH! SQUE! MUST RESIST URGE TO GLOMP SCREEN, RESIST!
PinkIchigo17
2008-10-26 . chapter 8
OMIGAWD!
This was completly AWESOME!! =D
I loved the whole story, the plot was great, and you had great descriptions!!
LOVED it! =)
FlurryDivider
2008-10-25 . chapter 8
OMFG I LOVED THIS STORY!

the ending had me hanging on the edge of my seat... well as much on the edge of the seat as you possibly can sitting in the middle of a bed... but its the thought that counts!

the egg and glue catapault thing at then end had me laughing my ** off, as did the rikie-poo thing.

i loved it!
Night Xiniall
2008-09-07 . chapter 8
'O' Dude, this was awesome! Great idea and stuff. It was funny, and dramatic, and... magical...

It's great. Really great.

-NX.
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