What has happened to my buddy Shino he is acting like Neji Man i need to hit him over the head no one treats sisters like that. Tell him i am coming over to kick his ** when kakashi comes home to watch the kids. LMAO!

Great funny story girl loved it!

moonwitch

Stupidest dialouge evah is da perfect name for that chapter Megu-chan

Your char is a little tiny bit mary-sueish because of her description.eg
Hair: Raspberry Umber coloured, curled to her shoulders.
Eyes: Aqua with a tint of pink

The Aburame all have black hair and blue eyes(i say his pic without glasses.)
so ya...
but don't let my comment get u down.
your plot is still good :D