 Fragrant Ink 2007-05-09 . chapter 1Your char is a little tiny bit mary-sueish because of her description.eg
Hair: Raspberry Umber coloured, curled to her shoulders.
Eyes: Aqua with a tint of pink
The Aburame all have black hair and blue eyes(i say his pic without glasses.)
so ya...
but don't let my comment get u down.
your plot is still good :D |