that was so cute!
but not really alot of
anise/ion
boo!
na just kidding!
i really liked!
and the ending tittles!
hahahaha
so cute too!
"ion gained the tittle of colette"
hahahaha

Heh... Oh how we love Ion and his adorable clumisness and selflessness.

Loved the titles at the end, by the way.

I actually laughed out loud over the titles at the end. "Colette"-- that is just priceless, and so, so true. xD

Very solid writing. Your characterization of Jade was brilliant, by the way. You managed to retain his subtle but direct manner of speaking without making it sound forced. :B

Awesome job!

LMAO COLETTE

Hahaha. I laughed at the "Colette" title. I really could see this as a title-gaining subevent. I really enjoyed the interaction between Anise and Jade.

I enjoyed this story very much! And I want to congradualate you on a job well done.

I'm very impressed that you were able to portray Anise and Jade so well, expecially when Anise and Jade found Ion. And that "You're just like that clumsy Chosen girl from the fairy tales..." thing, very nice!

I hope to read more from you!
-Amelia

lol. collette. this was nice.
i'd like to request some luke jade interaction? it's such a rare find. i do love your fics so much, especially since you do them so well and IC. i hope to see more from you.

You've out done yourself Griff. Perfect Jade and Anise humor, some good drama, and wonderful plot. Adding Titles at the end was icing on the cake. Especially Jade's.

YC: I liked the titles at the end. ^^ Especially the ToS references!

ToS reference! xD Anyway, it's really cute! Love the Anise and Jade interaction!

"Honestly, Ion, you're such a klutz..." Anise sighed. "You're just like that clumsy Chosen girl from the fairy tales..."
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LMFAO! COLETTE SYNDROME! LMFAO!

Hehe, that was sweet. I love Anise and Jade, and incorperating ToS in there was pretty cool, too.

No title is as powerful as "Littlest Big Sister." :P

So, yay! Nice all around. Random commas and stuff you already know about, so I won't go into it more. Just a little warm and fuzziness. I knew you'd have fun with it. :3

So, how about some chaptered stuff, now? :P

Nice...very nice...I loved the ToS reference too...

Thanks for yet another good story!

Heheh. 'Colette.' -giggles- I love the interactions between Jade and Anise, they really do act like father and daughter. You did a really god job of showing that too. Poor Anise though, she's short. -knows the feeling-

Overall I really enjoyed it, yet it seems to me Ion did rather a lot in what? Half an hour? Talking with the Field Marshall, looking for a cat, falling down stairs, losing consciousness, waking up, then falling asleep. Yup, he sure gets around...