Story: 7.5/10. I think that you've got some interesting musings here, but there isn't enough structure to suit me. It seems like ramblings that don't really go anywhere.

Characters: 8/10. I think that you express what it is to be a Nobody really well, though I wish that there was a tad more differentiation between the characters' personalities.

Creativity: 6.75/10. You see this type of stuff a ton in this fandom, but I get the sense that you come to your own conclusions about things.

Writing: 7.5/10. Not too many mistakes, but sometimes your writing is awkward and too wordy.

Believability: 7.25/10. While I think that the whole idea of two nobodies making one whole is interesting, I am not sure how well it actually works. In general, though, I think that the fic is believable.

Overall: 7.5/10. I like the way you play with what being a Nobody means, though I wish that the story had a clearer point.

aww thats so sad

AND BEAUTIFUL! i loved it

This was really good. I liked it a lot.