AH! I don't know what it is, I can't help loving when Leo gets all protective and slightly deranged. Especially where Raph is concerned. I mean, everyone knows he cares but it's a bit harder to find between the two of them and I just love anything whre Leo goes all watchdog (for lack of a better term, my apologies). You've got some of the best TMNT interactions, I swear.

Oh I love Leo and how concerned he is for Raph during this! Absolutely wonderful fic!

Poor Raph.

It's not often I find a fic written in short diary entrances to be an actual good read. Normally they lose my attention and I move on to the next fic. But this one caught me, held me and left me wanting more.

Well done!

I've never encountered a story where a turtle writes a journal entry to tell the events going on... and I liked it! Very original... :)

Holy crap. This is brilliant too. Where have you been all my life?

Ek, you haven't updated in awhile. Write more okay? I'll say that in advance. Because I'm going to go through every TMNT thing you've written now, and I will be sad when I get to the end of it.

XOXO

Winnychan

Overall, I liked this. I think I would have liked a little more detail in each entry. It was like you lightly skipped over the timeline. That's not necessarily a bad thing. But it certainly makes the reader feel like the time goes by more quickly than it did for poor Leo.

But overall, well done. ^_^

I really liked this one. The entries were short, yet I knew exactly what was going on. I don't think longer entries would have made sense under the circumstances. Beautiful job.

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SO GOOD!

-Cuddles raph and leo-

your a great writer let me know you ever need a co writer!

that was cute. And I was like OMG he wont die will he? the whole time!

Very cute, I liked it :]

I like it, it a really interesting series of entries, and I like the recovery at the end. However I think the best part is the soul search Leo does right before Raph wakes up... I think it would help the story greatly to expand this just a little more. The waking up seems abrupt. Not that Raph should stay comatose longer, but it would be really interesting to read a longer exchange with Raph waking up and recovering, maybe the two borthers sharing thier feelings about the whole thing, and it would make the whole read more rewarding

I really don't like "Turtle dies in this story" thing. Sure, that is the point of fanfiction, exercising the possibilities, and putting the angst in another level. But I hate feeling depressed for them.

Glad you didn't took that road and made Raph better. I'm really relieved.

Leo's so protective, it's cute! I like how subtly you can see Leo's nerves wearing away. Great job!

Wow. Ok, this is awsome. The piont where he was losing it there... wow. This is really good. Nothing else to say.

Aw!! I think that you should make another chapter with Raph's point of view. That would be nice. Great story!